LOOOOL Look, I've never left a comment before I've finished all the routes of a VN, but this is just great XD I like the way the game progresses, it's perfect for a simple game like this. Simple progression of the plot that just gets to the point, revealing just the things we need to know for the game to have the right impact. Perfect, really!! Anyway, I just came here to say, that after I got my first ending, Canibal Love: Bad ending, I internally shrieked "There's a GOOD ending in this?!?!" Hahaha, I guess it's time to find out if that was just a way to get my hopes up, before CRUSHING them XDXD
Your game's simple, short and (sickeningly ;)) sweet, but right to the point. It does just what it's meant to. Thanks for letting me play it, Creator!!!
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Just finished. I'm glad to know why some endings are called "True" Endings, rather than good ones. A surpruisingly solemn finish to a game that housed such an edgy trope. I like that. It was a serious ending to something that would have left a serious scar.
Thank you ! I really appreciate your comment (that's the kind of reaction I love to read about this game). You've understood its purpose very well and that makes me happy. So, thank you very much ! <3
I love this game so much. I really love games that look sweet but turn out twisted and dark so this was right up my ally. Quick question though is how many endings are there? I've gotten two no matter what I choose so i was just wondering. Great game and I enjoyed playing it!
Thank you for your previous comment and yeeeeees any help would be great! It's so kind of you ^^ If you want you can contact me on Twitter (@WaterHorseGames) or by mail zena.makes.videogames@gmail.com
I saw ManlyBadassHero play this and honestly I wanna say my own thoughts but first of all Takuyas character is really interesting and I love it and secondly the art could be a little better but it isn’t bad it’s still on the good side uwu
I really enjoyed this game, and I've worked as an Editor/Translation Check on a handful of visual novels, would you to be willing to let me proofread/edit your English version?
It would be for free, of course, I just want to help make the game as good as possible. :D
Sorry for the slow reply - I fell very ill for a while.
I can either play through the game and make a .txt of edits/corrections manually, or if you could export the narration/dialog into a file, I could work on that via Google Docs. Do you know what might work best?
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LOOOOL Look, I've never left a comment before I've finished all the routes of a VN, but this is just great XD I like the way the game progresses, it's perfect for a simple game like this. Simple progression of the plot that just gets to the point, revealing just the things we need to know for the game to have the right impact. Perfect, really!! Anyway, I just came here to say, that after I got my first ending, Canibal Love: Bad ending, I internally shrieked "There's a GOOD ending in this?!?!" Hahaha, I guess it's time to find out if that was just a way to get my hopes up, before CRUSHING them XDXD
Your game's simple, short and (sickeningly ;)) sweet, but right to the point. It does just what it's meant to. Thanks for letting me play it, Creator!!!
Edit:
Just finished. I'm glad to know why some endings are called "True" Endings, rather than good ones. A surpruisingly solemn finish to a game that housed such an edgy trope. I like that. It was a serious ending to something that would have left a serious scar.
Thank you ! I really appreciate your comment (that's the kind of reaction I love to read about this game). You've understood its purpose very well and that makes me happy. So, thank you very much ! <3
I love this game so much. I really love games that look sweet but turn out twisted and dark so this was right up my ally. Quick question though is how many endings are there? I've gotten two no matter what I choose so i was just wondering. Great game and I enjoyed playing it!
Hi! First thank you for your comment :) There are 2 endings so you've surely got all of them
...This is so sick. I love it.
oh yeah, question. Is there by any chance you would want somebody to draw some scenes for the game?
Thank you for your previous comment and yeeeeees any help would be great! It's so kind of you ^^ If you want you can contact me on Twitter (@WaterHorseGames) or by mail zena.makes.videogames@gmail.com
aaa sorry for the late reply, there was family over ^^ I followed you through my twitter account which is
alsoGrapedGrayI saw, perfect!
I saw ManlyBadassHero play this and honestly I wanna say my own thoughts but first of all Takuyas character is really interesting and I love it and secondly the art could be a little better but it isn’t bad it’s still on the good side uwu
I wanted to ask something.
I really enjoyed this game, and I've worked as an Editor/Translation Check on a handful of visual novels, would you to be willing to let me proofread/edit your English version?
It would be for free, of course, I just want to help make the game as good as possible. :D
Thank you ! It would be great to have some help with translation. How do you proceed ?
Sorry for the slow reply - I fell very ill for a while.
I can either play through the game and make a .txt of edits/corrections manually, or if you could export the narration/dialog into a file, I could work on that via Google Docs. Do you know what might work best?
No problem ^^
Both are good. Can I have your email or other to contact you ?
kiddmaniac@gmail.com
Thank you !
A lot more than what I came for. Totally charming. 10/10
<3 <3 <3
Short but...sweet? ;-D 5 STARS
Hehe~ Thank you for playing <3