I absolutely adore this man, like, I love me my unstable yandere's, I'm just sad we don't have an option where we either stay with him or he forces us to stay with him, the true ending made me so sad, though the other ending I did love the way he quickly spiralled
I -almost- passed this game by. But then I read the 'spoiler alert' comment and realized it wasn't as fluff-fluff as it seems, so it's worth a try. ^_^
My point is: Might wanna hint at the darker aspects, because people who want fluff might not always want darker things, and those who love darker things might pass it over thinking it's pure fluff.
(Even if some people like both things, not everyone do.)
Just a tip.
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You notice it pretty quickly when you play the game tho. He's as subtle as a sledge-hammer.
That is not to say the story is bad, it's just that the character in it really sucks at what he's trying to do. lol He's way too obvious too fast.
(If it -is- a writing problem, since the creator may not be...well... THAT (trying to avoid spoilers) I can suggest some books on the subject and tips too, if said creator want it. ^_^ )
I DO wish you have more control over the mc's reaction tho. I mean... he's really sweet, what with the chopping in the kitchen and all.
(Which is not to say I wouldn't have dug my heels in and dug up the truth. But between him being sweet, and keeping your temper being smart, the mc's reaction is just really alien to me.)
Oh, Takuya... *sigh* You should have been more cunning and manipulative instead... it would have worked better than force... But I get that he isn't skilled enough to pull that off.
Why must you lie tho? Why can't you just love him? He IS very sweet.
A bit of a dork, certainly. And you need to have a serious talk to him about certain control issues.... But I don't see why you would stop loving him for it.
(Being pissed off, I get that, all things considered. But all couples argue from time to time. You just need to talk it out and fix things.)
...alright.... did NOT see that end coming. o_O Maybe he needs a bit more than just a talk. Sheezh.
The CG is amazing tho! ^_^
The Bad Ending (C.L.) was cute, but not ideal...
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Take two...
Awww..... He's so sweet.... 😭 Poor guy... He loves you so much....
And you don't even get the chance to say yes to his question.
The True Ending is so saaaaaaaddd..... 😭
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Take three....
....nope. Only two endings.
Not one of them a good ending. *sigh*
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This game is really short, but very cute.
I wish it was longer, and that Tanaka was more subtle and better at what he was doing.
I also wish you have more choices, instead of acting like an idiot. Especially towards the end.
I mean... Yes, clearly you need to introduce some ground rules for the relationship, but he means well.
He just need to learn other ways to earn your love.
I'm sure he'd be happier if he knew for sure you loved him back too. And I'm sure he can learn, if that's what it takes to win you over. ^_^
But the writing and art is good, and I would absolutely recommend this as a yandere game.
(Sorry, but that spoiler must exist if you want to attract people who love this style game.)
I really loved to play this little game ! Congratulations for your work and I look forward another masterpieces ❤️❤️❤️ Takuya is lovely instead of being unstable 😔
The writing, the pace, the yandere himself, the everything! I like a story that's more choice heavy, but this?! There were a few choices to make, but I was so invested in the story itself it didn't even matter! This was so frickin' GOODT. I loved this!! Amazing job, dev! Standing ovation!
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The character flip was 100/10 not only my favorite part. but the BEST part. Seeing him go from loving "boyfriend" to yandere to full on unstable psycho?! "You're looking at me like..." and here I am full on expecting him to say like he's crazy, psycho, a killer, or something along those lines, but instead his face contorts more and more and then he hits me with "Like you're SOBER"?! AHHH THE CHEF'S KISS THAT WAS THAT PART. I kinda figured we were being drugged but him just outright ADMITTING it?! Yoooooo!! I loved that! I love, love, love, love, LOVE this visual novel! The dev did such an amazing job!
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I absolutely adore this man, like, I love me my unstable yandere's, I'm just sad we don't have an option where we either stay with him or he forces us to stay with him, the true ending made me so sad, though the other ending I did love the way he quickly spiralled
I -almost- passed this game by.
But then I read the 'spoiler alert' comment and realized it wasn't as fluff-fluff as it seems, so it's worth a try. ^_^
My point is: Might wanna hint at the darker aspects, because people who want fluff might not always want darker things, and those who love darker things might pass it over thinking it's pure fluff.
(Even if some people like both things, not everyone do.)
Just a tip.
-
You notice it pretty quickly when you play the game tho.
He's as subtle as a sledge-hammer.
That is not to say the story is bad, it's just that the character in it really sucks at what he's trying to do. lol
He's way too obvious too fast.
(If it -is- a writing problem, since the creator may not be...well... THAT (trying to avoid spoilers) I can suggest some books on the subject and tips too, if said creator want it. ^_^ )
I DO wish you have more control over the mc's reaction tho.
I mean... he's really sweet, what with the chopping in the kitchen and all.
(Which is not to say I wouldn't have dug my heels in and dug up the truth. But between him being sweet, and keeping your temper being smart, the mc's reaction is just really alien to me.)
Oh, Takuya... *sigh* You should have been more cunning and manipulative instead... it would have worked better than force...
But I get that he isn't skilled enough to pull that off.
Why must you lie tho?
Why can't you just love him?
He IS very sweet.
A bit of a dork, certainly.
And you need to have a serious talk to him about certain control issues.... But I don't see why you would stop loving him for it.
(Being pissed off, I get that, all things considered.
But all couples argue from time to time.
You just need to talk it out and fix things.)
...alright.... did NOT see that end coming. o_O
Maybe he needs a bit more than just a talk. Sheezh.
The CG is amazing tho! ^_^
The Bad Ending (C.L.) was cute, but not ideal...
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Take two...
Awww..... He's so sweet.... 😭
Poor guy... He loves you so much....
And you don't even get the chance to say yes to his question.
The True Ending is so saaaaaaaddd..... 😭
---
Take three....
....nope. Only two endings.
Not one of them a good ending. *sigh*
--
This game is really short, but very cute.
I wish it was longer, and that Tanaka was more subtle and better at what he was doing.
I also wish you have more choices, instead of acting like an idiot.
Especially towards the end.
I mean... Yes, clearly you need to introduce some ground rules for the relationship, but he means well.
He just need to learn other ways to earn your love.
I'm sure he'd be happier if he knew for sure you loved him back too.
And I'm sure he can learn, if that's what it takes to win you over. ^_^
But the writing and art is good, and I would absolutely recommend this as a yandere game.
(Sorry, but that spoiler must exist if you want to attract people who love this style game.)
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Oh my! I loved it!! I don't want to spoil it! but the switch!! oh my!! I would've liked it more if it had more endings, but I liked it either way
i got the bad ending then the true ending after - this makes me wonder what would come next
Hello!
I have made a Brazilian Portuguese gameplay for your game sometime ago!
I also have something to ask you...
I want to work making translations for games too.
But I need to get some experience first so...could you give your permission to translate your game from English to Brazilian Portuguese?
(Recently I have transtale two games: green bakery and inclement indée fixe)
And I believe this can help you reach more people!
Thank you! I just answered you email ;)
Great reveals. Gave me chills a few times.
this game it's really good, i never thing that i will find such an amaizing game, the history it's just incredible.
I really loved to play this little game ! Congratulations for your work and I look forward another masterpieces ❤️❤️❤️ Takuya is lovely instead of being unstable 😔
THIS WAS SO GOOD~!! <3
The writing, the pace, the yandere himself, the everything! I like a story that's more choice heavy, but this?! There were a few choices to make, but I was so invested in the story itself it didn't even matter! This was so frickin' GOODT. I loved this!! Amazing job, dev! Standing ovation!
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The character flip was 100/10 not only my favorite part. but the BEST part. Seeing him go from loving "boyfriend" to yandere to full on unstable psycho?! "You're looking at me like..." and here I am full on expecting him to say like he's crazy, psycho, a killer, or something along those lines, but instead his face contorts more and more and then he hits me with "Like you're SOBER"?! AHHH THE CHEF'S KISS THAT WAS THAT PART. I kinda figured we were being drugged but him just outright ADMITTING it?! Yoooooo!! I loved that! I love, love, love, love, LOVE this visual novel! The dev did such an amazing job!